So there are three writers for this, but what can the writing be other than one page of rambling notes? It's such a shallow story without anything really happening besides a video game you don't even get to play? In 20 minutes you should really be able to fit in some dramaturgy other than just cool guys don't look at explosions.

A bit shallow as a representation of DnD, could've been any fantasy battle scene as it lacks the story telling of the game. Looks good though, even if I'm loving the animation style.